Many writers start with short stories before they move onto novel writing. Kind of a walk-before-you-can-run thing. Short stories are great to start with because they take less time to write and usually require a less complicated structure, letting you develop your story-telling skills in a more manageable way.

Of course, short stories are an art form of their own, but if you want to try your hand at writing a novel it can feel like a very daunting task. After all, a novel isn’t simply a really long short story. Oh no, we’re dealing with a whole nother kettle of fish. (Which is a pretty strange saying, when you think about it – who’s keeping their fish in kettles?) So what is the difference between short story and novel writing?

First, let’s think about the main difference between a novel and a short story:

  • A novel is a journey – not only for the characters, but for the writer and the reader.
  • A short story is an intense experience – something to linger over and savour.

To capture these differences, you’re going to have to write in a different way. Here are some points to keep in mind.

Difference 1: Length and pacing

The most obvious difference between a novel and a short story is length. Now, there are no set rules about how long a short story should be, or how long a novel should be. And rightly so, as there’s more to it all than that.

However, a novel is a larger scale project that takes a lot more stamina than a short story. It will take longer to write, so you need to make sure you have a complex and sustainable idea. You need to be ready to commit a large amount of time and effort into writing a novel.

It is also easier to lose track of your writing, so keeping chapter summaries in a spreadsheet can be useful, or using software such as Scrivener to organise your chapters and scenes.

The longer your narrative, the more you have to think about pacing, too, since you’re going to have to convince your reader to keep going for longer. Pacing is affected by the number of plot events your narrative contains (quickening the pace) as well as the level of detail in your writing (slowing the pace). Variation and balance is key. How well you can handle the pacing of your story is determined by the complexity and sustainability of your main idea.

Difference 2: Plots and subplots

More words does not mean more plot/action. Read that line again. Let it sink in.

It’s almost instinctual to think that you need more stuff happening in a novel than you do in a short story, and many beginners end up with vast, complex plots … I’ve fallen victim to this idea, myself!

You do not need an awful lot more going on when writing a novel. You need a lot more development of the strands you have – reaction from characters, how they feel, how they grow, how they deal with problems.

Subplots can be used in both short stories and novels, but are mostly used in novels. They are parallel stories that run alongside the main narrative that enrichen the plot or the theme in some way.

Difference 3: Complexity of conflict

Short stories contain problems that are resolvable quickly. They usually focus on one aspect of a character’s life, or one aspect of a problem/relationship in a character’s life.

In a novel, the issues and conflict tend to be deeper, and ideas can expand in more than one direction. The difference lies in the size of the problem and how easily resolvable it is.

Some short stories have the potential to turn into novels; for example, if there’s a large scope to explore a character’s past, or whether more events can branch off from the main conflict of the story.

Difference 4: Timespan …?

The difference between a short story and a novel is not necessarily to do with time span. Some novels are set in a day (for example, Mrs Dalloway by Virginia Woolf). Some short stories can be set over several days, or even several years or different time periods (for example, ‘The Hanging Girl’ by Ali Smith). Usually, however, flash fiction (a very short story) is contained to one moment or one scene. 

Difference 5: Depth

The biggest difference between a short story and a novel, though, is how deep the writing goes. Novels have the room to contain a deeper exploration of a larger number of characters, details, thoughts, and so on, and can more easily hold multiple points of view.

When I say novels contain more depth, I don’t mean they have more meaning. Short stories have just as much potential for meaning and resonance as novels do – in fact, brevity can often heighten these aspects of writing, creating effect more in what is left unsaid than what’s directly on the page.

Instead, I’m talking about how much detail the writer can go into on the page – which is inextricably linked to both length, complexity and pace.

These ideas in action

It’s story time, children! Go get a mug of hot chocolate and snuggle into your favourite blanket.

Have a read of this Gabriel Garcia Marquez story ‘One of These Days’ (http://www.classicshorts.com/stories/ootdays.html).

Pretty good, right?

Here’s a quick recap. (Or a summary for those of you too lazy to read the very short short story. Tut.)

The surface conflict of the story is that the Mayor wants his tooth removed; the dentist is reluctant to treat him and displays a sense of nonchalance. The Mayor then threatens to shoot the dentist if he doesn’t pull his tooth. This raises the tension. Surely the Mayor is joking, though? But the way the dentist eyes his own revolver gives the threat an underlying menace. Just as the dentists pulls the rotten tooth from the Mayor’s jaw (without anaesthesia), he says, ‘Now you’ll pay for our twenty dead men.’ This single line adds meaning to the conflict.

How this works as a short story: This story contains a simple narrative. The dentist of a small town takes the opportunity to inflict a small act of revenge on a Mayor who has done the town wrong. The story is around 1000 words long and focuses on one relationship and one simple conflict, which is resolved. It works brilliantly as a short story.

How it would have to be different to become a novel: This simple revenge story also contains the potential for expansion. Why are the men dead? Is the Mayor really corrupt? Why does the dentist hate the Mayor so much? What else has he done? Was the dentist linked to one of the dead men? What’s the back-story of this uneducated dentist in the surgery full of dust and cobwebs? If the author were to attempt to go into this level of depth, the prose would expand into a novel. As it is at the moment, it perfectly serves the short story form.

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In all, the main difference between short story and novel writing is not just about producing more words – it’s about the scale and depth of the prose. You need a complex idea that’s worth exploring, and then you need to explore it.

Easier said than done? Take a look 5 Simple Steps to Move from Short Story to Novel Writing, in which I address how you can take to put all this information into action. (Cue inspirational music.)

 

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About the Author:

Sophie is the Director of Liminal Pages, where she offers editorial services to authors and training to fiction editors. She's a Professional Member of the Society of Editors and Proofreaders and trained with The Publishing Training Centre. Back in the day, she worked at the largest publishing company in the world before galavanting off to do an MA in creative writing at Royal Holloway, University of London (to add to her BA in English literature with creative writing from UEA). She would like to live on a steampunk airship.

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