Manuscript Critique 2018-12-12T16:05:14+00:00

Editing can make your sentences beautiful, but it can’t fix a flawed story. When your novel has been alive in your head for so long you can’t see the woods for the trees, you need expert analysis and unbiased guidance.

A solid foundation

No amount of proofreading or copy-editing can fix a book if it is flawed at a deeper level. Great books have solid foundations: imaginative and focused stories, carefully structured plots, deeply crafted characters and well-paced scenes. Whether you’re planning to self-publish or send your manuscript to agents, you need to be completely happy with the story you’ve written.

An honest appraisal

A manuscript critique gives you a professional, honest insight into your novel – what works, what doesn’t and suggestions on how to improve it. Though I always treat your writing with sensitivity, I don’t hold back on the criticism (otherwise, what’s the point?). With my feedback, you’ll be able to develop your book and get a better idea of how readers will receive it. ‘But my mum loved it’ won’t cut it in the real world!

Improve your future books

Even the most accomplished writers know there is always more to learn. Every book poses new challenges and new opportunities to hone your craft. And every book is a learning opportunity. With a manuscript critique, you’ll not only learn how to improve your current book, but you’ll gain a deeper understanding of your personal writing process and your knowledge and pitfalls, so you can apply what you learn to all your future novels.


  1. You email me and let me know you’re interested in a critique. Let me know the genre and word count.
  2. Once we’ve agreed on a timeframe for the work, I’ll send you an invoice for the 50% deposit and a questionnaire for you to fill out so I can get to know your book and writing aims a little better. Your place in my schedule is locked in as soon as the deposit is paid.
  3. You send me the full manuscript (and completed questionnaire) before the project start date.
  4. I go away and carefully analyse your novel. If I have any questions, I’ll email you.
  5. Once I finish writing your critique, I email it to you along with the invoice for the remaining fee.


I will carefully read your manuscript and provide you with a thoughtful overall assessment of your novel. This will be presented as an editorial report, a PDF normally between 10–20 pages, in which I highlight any major issues and suggest how you can improve your story. You’ll gain a new perspective on your work and the confidence that comes in knowing what works and what you need to do to make your book even better.


  • Manuscripts up to 80k words: £599
  • Manuscripts 81–100k words: £649
  • Manuscripts 101–120k words: £699
  • Manuscripts above 120k words: Please enquire

If you hire me to critique further novels in the same series, a £50 discount will be applied for each of those subsequent manuscripts.

I’ve worked with other editors in the past but none as thorough, patient or supportive as Sophie. She made my work better and in the process made me a better writer. I simply couldn’t recommend her highly enough.
Tony Faggioli

Having read your report, I couldn’t be happier, even though it means I’ve got much more work to do on my novel – at least I will have the confidence of knowing it will be going in the right direction. I feel my money has been very well spent and that your hard work represents incredibly good value. […] No part of the critique seems negative. I have only found very useful and well-considered suggestions […] Your enthusiasm has filled me with excitement.

Anthony Burn
Your feedback seems to really engage with the writing. I’ve had a lot of feedback by a lot of different people over the years, but the level of detail and empathy for the goals of the story that you have is remarkable … It’s one of the most useful critiques I’ve ever had. I’d recommend you to anyone looking to improve their work.
Angela Readman
It was great to get such a detailed critique. The criticisms rang true and were encapsulated in a way that made it easy for me to see the problems. Getting this feedback has really given me encouragement to fix the issues and make it a more professional and complete book.
Ben Ellis
Your feedback was written really constructively. You were interested in me as a writer and what I had to say. I realized I was working with someone, rather than just taking feedback from someone.
Gina Maya

Interested? Get in touch now, and let’s talk about your book.