Whose Story is It Anyway? How to Choose Your Narrator

It may be your book, but guess what? It isn’t your story.

It’s fun to be the gods of our own fictional worlds. But when it comes to the telling of our tales, who’s doing the telling? It isn’t you. It’s the narrator.

The narrator is a character within your book. We see the events unfold through their eyes. It’s their voice that we hear when we read the words on the page. It’s their agenda that shapes the plot and drives the story forward.

With that in mind, choose carefully.

Considering the narrator is an often over-looked element of novel writing. Many writers focus on coming up with a great story (and so they should), but fail to realise the whole essence of a book will change depending on who’s telling that story.

Some examples:

  • Room by Emma Donoghue is narrated by a young boy who is being held captive in a small room along with his mother. He has a unique perspective on the world, since his world has always just been a single room. If the mother were the narrator, the whole book would change.
  • The Road by Cormac McCarthy has a distant omniscient third-person narrative. By not getting too close to the characters within the story, the unknown narrator stands back in shell-shocked horror, telling the story of an inconceivable apocalypse in simple one-clause sentences and monosyllabic words.
  • Game of Thrones by George R. R. Martin uses several distinct narrators, each with their own chapters. This allows there to be many stories that combine to create a rich, interconnected world, without stories and characters becoming muddled.

Consider this:

So now you understand the importance of choosing the right narrator. But how do you go about choosing? Well, as the title of this post suggest, first consider whose story you’re really telling. What would their voice be like? How would their viewpoint limit the information you can reveal? Could another character offer a more convenient, interesting or meaningful view? When it comes down to it:

  • What are you trying to accomplish in this story? (If using multiple narrators: What are you trying to accomplish in this scene?)
  • Which character will help you best accomplish this?

Choose your narrator with intent. The essence of your novel depends on it.

 

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By | 2017-09-05T13:48:10+00:00 September 12th, 2014|Novel Writing|0 Comments

About the Author:

Sophie Playle runs Liminal Pages, where she offers editorial services to authors and training to fiction editors. She's a Professional Member of the Society for Editors and Proofreaders and trained with The Publishing Training Centre. She worked at the largest publishing company in the world before galavanting off to do an MA in creative writing at Royal Holloway, University of London (to add to her BA in English literature with creative writing from UEA). She would like to live on a steampunk airship.

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